Maria had risen through the ranks because of her mentor, David. David had protected her, promoted her, and taught her the business. But she discovered David was falsifying reports. Her loyalty screamed, “Protect him. He protected you.” But Chapter 3 taught her otherwise. She confronted David privately, gave him a chance to confess, and when he refused, she reported him. David was fired. Years later, he thanked her. “You were the only one who treated me like an adult capable of responsibility,” he said. Her loyalty to truth saved the man, not the mask.
If you want, I can expand this into a full scene with dialogue, write the entire chapter (2,000–3,000 words), or outline the rest of the book. Which would you like? Lesson in Loyalty -Chapter 3-
Maria had risen through the ranks because of her mentor, David. David had protected her, promoted her, and taught her the business. But she discovered David was falsifying reports. Her loyalty screamed, “Protect him. He protected you.” But Chapter 3 taught her otherwise. She confronted David privately, gave him a chance to confess, and when he refused, she reported him. David was fired. Years later, he thanked her. “You were the only one who treated me like an adult capable of responsibility,” he said. Her loyalty to truth saved the man, not the mask.
If you want, I can expand this into a full scene with dialogue, write the entire chapter (2,000–3,000 words), or outline the rest of the book. Which would you like?